Touching...you can feel the pain... Beautiful poem.

xxx

Hello. :)

I hope you don't see me as one of those people...? Lol, just kidding. I enjoyed this poem...the meaning was deep and emotional, and i admired the flow.

There was just a couple of typos/spelling errors.

*correct

tare= *tear

riped= *ripped

I still thought the poem was awesomely written. :)

Peaces. //ari\\

Surprisingly this brought alot of memories of my high school years. Saddly but the only difference I went away to get a better education and a chance to learn you just gave up. Taken from a stand point of a victim this works well with those that think like that. But not I, We all go through our trials but some give up and some fight tell me in this poem which did you do? makes you think doesn't it?...

Interesting poem. Very nicely done. I really enjoyed reading it. Very nice.
~FotF