It doesnt flow that well to me... but I think it's okay. Plz Rate!

i try not to write about sadness myself,because no matter how fast you get over that feeling the poem will always remind you,but this was really good,i liked the end alot

thanks for commenting
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wow, your poem was really great. You have a lot of potential. I also like to write sad poems and ive seen a lot and this was one of my personal favorites.

JuLz

your writing is great...i really liked it...5/5