a really great poem...i dont see many people using the kind of rhyme you did...and you did it the right way...sweet work...keep it up eh??

--Nick--

wow, this was amazing. It had a very good flow. great job. 10/5
much love,
marjan

Good poem, my eyes feel like that most of the times, with burning behind them. Thanks for the comment, also you work is well written, with well though layout. Keep it up

nice poem, i can relate to a lot of it. nicely writte, well done!

i loved the poem i can totally relate to it.
thanks 4 ready and commenting on my poem.

thank you for the comment on my poem i will continue on working on my weaknesses!

and youre poem is very wide i can see all youre points.
5/5
-Rachel

this is really well written and I can relate so much to those feelings..I've been there so many times..I still am. just hang in there k? and thanks so much for your comment.
Christina