by Amanda Jul 21, 2005
category :
Internet slang /
friendship, family
A thousand tears pass my eyes as I’m lying on the bed, |
by Lenny
Thats gorgeous, i like the tense its set it and the message |
by cac123
This was so beautiful and heartfelt i reaally enjoyed this and i can relate it to all of my fights with friends.. it really is amazing you are a really good writer. |
by Britney
Wow very nice poem. You could tell that all your emotion was in that! The ending truly was something though But this poem was awesome! 5/5! your also very talented and I plan to read more of your poetry when I have the time but until then keep it up! Much luv xox Britney xox |
This is such a heartfelt write so sad and blue. I hope things did work out for you. |
by RachelAnne
thats really good! |