by steviee Jul 21, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
The Redness, the drop of tears. The pain that you have caused I am ending right now, my last breath i am going to take. The pain is flowing from my arm, maybe you will be the one to find me the one that caused all my pain! I thought that you loved me I thought that i was your girl! But I know now that it was all a joke you didn't love me at all [&] you never will so for my great Fair well! your the one that caused the pain that is now flowing from my wrist.. Red was always a pretty colour but its even prettier when its dripping from my wrist.. The tears have now stopped! only my limp body lays there now, in my pretty pool of blood .. Fair well my love for i am now gone [&] out of reach |
by *~* kelsey
hey. wow. that was a really good poem. i loved it so much. it was great! i love the way you talked about the blood being pretty. it totally went with the poem. it was great! 5/5! |
very nice poem and sad great job! |
good poem, i like it. |