interesting way of writeing it but its what it has to say that matters and it shows feelings and emotions!

Good jobz

-Josiah

you always seem to suprise me. the way you write your poems... is so unique. its great. and you put so much emotion into it. great job once again!!! 5/5

Simple, but great choice of words :) Nice piece, kind regards from kane

simple yet interesting xox

Ahhh a type of poem that i could never due, i applaud you for it. Nicely done poem and i think that it is truely something good. But i am sensing a theme to your poems. I don't think anyone would be better off without you..i think someone would be lucky to have you even as their friend. Your a caring person and think your great.

P.S. thank you for all your comments, i tried to pay you back, i hope i have, i may IM you sometime, to talk poetry. If you don't mind. Thank you for the wonderful read.

Signed,
Dark Savior.