by TragicRomance Jul 22, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I thought I had the perfect guy, |
You rhyme, again but it is pressed. Try not rhyming in a couple, it may take teh hinges off the door and help you to say what you want without so many constraints. Your sentence structure may be better then too. Also, try changing your themes a little. Try thinking about problems all of humanity has, then write about that. It may help |
This is really good,I have felt that way before...Some guys are just stupid lol |