by /: Stray--X--Wolf :\ Jul 22, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Somber visions stalk my mind. |
by Alyssa
Mmm. I love it. |
by Marjan
you express your feelings wonderfully. |
by Britney
Wow very nice poem. You could tell that all your emotion was in that! The ending truly was something though. the whole thing sounds very painful to you so i hope the pain heals soon.. if it ever will. Anyways very excellent poem. I want to read more of your work. xoxox |
ur poems r good. like i no how u feel losing the one u love.. i have 2. like a guy told me "i love u always remeber that" he did alot for me, and we were like together for like a few months, and i found out like a week ago he never loved me never ment it, it hurts so much, i just feel like since that kinda thing happend to me before, i feel like no other guy could love me.. all b/c the stupid guys in my town. any ways great job on the poem, most of ur poems r good, keep the good work up |
Guess what?! Not everyone is the same. You'll find trust in someone...and for that girl that dumped you, not worth it...you don't deserve someone who'll treat you like that... |