by VampyraKi†Jul 22, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
The pain, the tears |
by †Undone♥
Oh, this was so good! Keep writing! |
Brilliant peice. really veryu well written, and a great flow |
by Juls
Wow thats other amazing work of yours and i love it. |
by Samantha
Wow.. this was amazing! it flowed wonderfully and all the phrases were linked and together and you got the story across flawlessly... keep it up |
by ASPHYXIATED
wow the flow was great on that poem!! |