This is a great piece, I enjoyed each and every line. I loved it. I love the story behind it. Great Job.

Libby

I thought this poem was very good,A good one for people to relate to,Check out some of my poems,Maybe you can relate to mine also :)

That reminds me of my ex but I'm over him now I've moved on to his cousin who is much cuter and have long spanish hair I can braide.Any-ways it was terrific and I hope you get over him.

It doesnt rhyme in a lot of parts, but thats not what poetry is about. and sometimes, i think poems can be better when they don't rhyme. Very nice comparisons. It's a very sweet poem. Good job.

Take Care,
Renee

I really kno how you feel....
I really miss my X...
I kno i screwed things up 4 us....

Hey thats realy good. i like it. did that realy happen?
xoxo
emmy
5/5

I really liked this one, I hate missing someone tht much. I definately know the hurt behind it, and the poem was really good with explaining it all to me again. good job:)

This is really great. I can relate to this poem. Keep up the good work. I give a 5/5