you dont gotta be sorry just show those people that they gotta grow up.

this poem is good but could work on the flow a little bit.

well done

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i agree with lisa... but i like it. it's bold!
good work!
xoxoxo

I like this, though the flow struggles a little the content s expresive and says a lot.

well done

Excellent poem. I can relate.5/5

Hmm.. not very poetic, but I respect your writing.