Ths poem is something in relation of my life. I think, (before Blanco) was haunted by this girl in my dreams. She never had any vision, listened to her doll, and seemed to kill any1 the doll said. I think I have paranoia, when I feel someone is watching me specifically in most of the time, yet, I can't comprehend this dream in a poem. Another failure...i'm worthless and pathetic...

dude what did i say about cheering up you are not a failure not worthless and you r not pathetic. i dont understand most of my dreams not every dream has a meaning to it. it is just random images that plays in your head when you are in deep sleep and well i have no idea what your dream is either but you know ur dream world is different from you real world and if for llike then i think 4th time cheer up it's just dreams they are not real well i hope you have some good dreams bout wat ever just not little girl that does every thing the dolls tell her to thats kinda scarey but it might make a good scarey movie well anyways good night and SWEET DREAMING ;)

Very good poem! I hope you can get past the paranoia you may be feeling...sounds pretty scary...I've had semi-paranoid feelings before...but nothing severe or scary like what you described.

"Another failure...i'm worthless and pathetic..." - Now I am telling you, you are NOT a failure; you are NOT worthless; and you are NOT pathetic. I will, however, tell you what you ARE. You are a gifted poet so don't stop writing, and please please please TRY to stop thinking those things about yourself.

"says I fell I’m being watched,
if he only knew."

^ I think you meant, "says I feel..."

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"I soon remember what that girl soon said,"

^It might be better if you edited one "soon" out.

And don't you dare put yourself down if those two things I pointed out were right...because everyone can improve and they were minor errors that everyone makes...and maybe just typos.

I hope one night you do experience a sweet dream...

xxx