Comments : To ponder beauty

  • 19 years ago

    by Rachel Moore

    i like how you expanded on soemthing else you've read before,
    it was kind of hard to follow but i liked it,good job
    ;)<3

  • 19 years ago

    by blackrose1011

    very casual tone
    nicly written

    ~Breeze

  • 19 years ago

    by keri

    i love this one....if u were able to follow it, please comment and vote....don't be shy---read all of my work!