I choose to fall

by keri   Jul 22, 2005


I choose to fall
through misty
clouds of snow
and velvet sheets
that surround me
We choose to feel
more alive
than asking
to die
The silence that sounded
dancing in morning's heart
was fierce but sweet
to take my own

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  • 19 years ago

    by keri

    i like the title----but of course, i'm the author! i don't usually enjoy my work, but this one is quite pleasing o the ear, if u know what i mean.....vote and comment, and if u don't mind, check out the rest of my work.....email me sometime, if u like! thx

  • 19 years ago

    by Fig

    ....! im adding you to my favourites and im going to go and read EVERY single one of your breath taking poems.

  • 19 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Sorry for my bad typing skills: You=your.

    Regards,

    Steve

  • 19 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Keri,

    Nice write. Thanks for you comment on my poem, I have made amendments, please have a look when you have time.

    Regards,

    Steve