by IWroteYouAPoemOnMyWrist Jul 22, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
You see me as i break to pieces |
by A Bnormal
I have read quite a few of your poems and they are extremely good. If you could read my poem 'Escape' and comment on it. I would really appreciate it. Keep up the GREAT work. |
by Spitfire
I like it |
Ur last two lines definitely made me enjoy the poem more. They swung it for me. Well done with the finish. Xx Peace xX |
by Shelbie
Very nice poem, I have felt like that alot of my time in loving someone it seems they are paranoid not knowing if they truly want you around or not. I also voted on your poem it is very nice! Your poem has alot of voice which is excellent, your point and how you feel is expressed excellent. Keep it up very very nice job! |
by Jordan
That is a extremely good poem. I really feel the emotion in this poem. Incredible job. |