by Mandy Lou
KANE! I'm sorry! I have to comment! It's just that I feel the exact same about 9/11 in America! It's really patriotic! I loved it! |
by BrokenMisery
Strong words, its so sad what happened, so stupid, ridiculous and just heartbreaking, i just wish they could leave others alone, all those memories those innocent people held when they passed away, all the stories they held, it just breaks you apart. Stay strong... |
Thank you for the comments :) I did read and rate this one...I just wasn't sure what to say in response...powerful poem...great as all the others, and very meaningful.... |
by Ana Vidovic
Awesome poem! I love the wording in it. My favorite line is: |
A great poem that goes to the heart. I also like the "apple" metaphor, amazing idea. |