Couldn't give up on me

by Zer0riginZ   Jul 22, 2005


Oh how could you not see,
I believe your too good for me.

I'm not worth,
what you put in.
Filthy as earth,
I'm full of sin.

If only you knew,
I don't deserve you.

Although its true,
that you love me,
and I love you.
We don't deserve to be.

I tell you to leave me now,
but you stand there and ask "how",
"when I love you so."

You've always been a rose,
and I was always a thorn.
What I've done in the past chose
a futur for me that is torn.

Will you, please leave me,
I love you but I'm sorry.
This is the way it has to be,
if only you saw my history...

I know we could still make it,
but all this stress and corruption,
I fear will break it.

I want to do whats best,
to set your free will do just that,
I can't help but smile, to see you not give up on me.
Maybe one more chance, to see if you and I could be.

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  • 18 years ago

    by 69BlueEyes69

    I can see you've put lots of feeling into this... i really enjoy it... n i can relate to it... well to a certain extent!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Mandy Lou

    I think that's cute, buddy! 5/5!

  • 19 years ago

    by Emily

    You've always been a rose,
    and I was always a thorn.
    What I've done in the past chose
    a futur for me that is torn.
    ^Overall awesome poem. 5/5

  • awwwww......m'dear andrew...what's wrong?? whats going on?? why be so dark..? when you love them, you love them, you cant ever change that!! Dont give up on love, ever!! Believe in hope, have hope!! Well, good luck!!

    Love ya, Flo

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