A New Life

by blackrose1011   Jul 22, 2005


My thoughts are a jamble-
gamble on this feeling…

Roses-How Beautiful!
they have yet to bloom…

You give the-
they smell so sweet…

love is so intense-
feelings immense!

white cloth-a hanger-an isle
dream about our future

flash of light, before my eyes
start a new life-

so soft and loving-
is it safe to think its right?

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  • 19 years ago

    by Kendall

    its different, i liked it

  • 19 years ago

    by Cory Mastrandrea

    Sounds like you were going for a certain feeling. Using this style and words to portray a certain feeling.

  • 19 years ago

    by Lindsay C

    great job. it's really nice!