This is a great peice...I wrote one like it a while ago...maybe you'd like to read it...it's called Until

I think this is the one you should send him

I love how this poem flows. It just unrolls itself so perfectly and its not long and repetative like a lot of love poems are (I even confess to writing poems like that). Its great. It vague enough that people can apply it to their own situation, but specific enough that we get the whole idea of whats going on. Awsome work! 5/5!

Aww thast great aweomse poem!

Omg!! i love this poem!! good work! keep it up

Wow i can relate to this poem =D. i know what you're talking about. great poem!

*cheLLey*

Awww i love this poem... thats how i feel right now...>.

Hey, liked that! Very beautiful, to swear love no matter how far apart!

Good Writing!
beth

Awsome write! 5/5

This is really good. Well Done. 5/5 gotta be.

This is a great poem, it makes a really sad thing sound like a sweet and cute thing. Keep Writing.

Its a gr8 poem
keep it up

Although this was short. I have to say I liked it. It was simple, and you got straight to the point!

There's not much else to say. I liked it the way it is. Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.