your poems are really good. sad, but good. i can really "feel" this poem :)

I really liked this one. The only thing I would have to say is to clean it up a little, i.e. you wrote ins’t instead of isn't, and used commas for everything. Great job on rhyming, it's not easy.

Beautiful and depressing go hand in hand for this piece. This one struck a chord in me, because I'm going through the same thing with a guy I liked (and still do). So I know how you feel. Your structure is better in this poem and I like your rhyme schemes and the level of intense pain you put into the work. Great job.

great poem 2 thumbs way way up for that poem its awesome.

That was truly amazing. The BEST poem I've read so far on this site, no lie. Wow. I'm stunned at the skill... It was so simple yet powerful, and the rhymes were flawless. Fantastic, wow. More than full points.

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Loved this poem, its really good, keep it up
Tara xxx