Inner Beauty

I think this is the best one of yours i've read up to yet. I loved it and the structure of the poem is great. It's a little different. Nobody sees the real person in most cases. They only see the beauty on the outside of the person. Brilliant :)

Another great poem keep up the good work.

Good job i get the message.. i can see that it isn't forced and it's all from the hart...

only lil thing is that sumtimes when you have short and then long sentances it makes the rythem shaky... try making them equal lenght or peeps replaying the same pattern

WHOA! Beautifully done! A message that so many young girls need to hear and more importantly understand. What made me understand is meeting a guy who I did not find attractive AT ALL but after getting to know him I found out he was awesome! One of the most beautiful people I know.
The only thing I'd suggest is to add something to this stanza ('truly' maybe)
"Now this is the girl
I truly want to be"
Just to make it a little more powerful.
No big deal...it'll still be perfect either way. Excellent write! :)

your poem was excellent!!!!!!! im not the prettiest girl but i want to be. if i go and starvve my self do u think that i will be skinny