awesome poem... the last stanza is excellent... 5/5 |
by **~xoxo~**
that was amazing i give u a 5/5... excellent word usage... if you can will u comment on some of my poems thanks....xoxo |
excellent poem...it says a lot. its one of my faves keep up the good work... |
by Black~Rose
great great great poem! lots of emotion and that's the best thing about this poem of urs! 5/5 you've got talent hunn keep it up! please read and comment my poems thanx! stay strong |
by Crystal
i think this is good.... if you go a little more it could reck the flow.... thats only my opinion but..... i like this.... it does get hard to hide it from parents and friends.... then they wonder what they done wrong and it just goes on.... anyways i really did like this poem.... |
by nichole
wow i really liked this. It was Great! |
i can relate...nice poem...keep up the great work... |
by SweetSuicide
That was trueing amazing poem..5/5 |
Wow, hun, i can totally relate. i'm a cutter, but I'm trying to stop. only 1 person knows about it. anyways, great job, 5/5. keep up the good work. |