i really liked it. it's so much true!
keep it up.
Lyudmila

I know how it feels like when someone is holding on to another person. That's exactly how I feel right now!.. This is an awesome poem on love. :)

I give it a five for the writing, i like to de-attach myself from the topic though. I don't really believe that love exists anymore. I think it is a good peice of literature. Very well done.

P.S. A reply to one of my poems would be appreciated if at all possible. oh, i didn't think people actually read "the read me" forums

So true. I think a lot of people can relate to this poem. Love is so confusing, I am still trying to figure it out! Good write! Take Care! Brooke~

I like the poem...it was well written and flowed very well BUT this "take a beating" stuff is a little whacky. I hope you didn't mean literally....and were talking more along the lines of hard times and not an actual BEATING. That's NOT love sweetie...lol I would suggest you change your to you're where necessary and capitalize where necessary......NICE WRITE!! :)

nice poe.. it was well-written and had a nice flow... very heartfelt
keep goin
nouna

Very nice poem. but i have to agree with Natalie84. hope the "beating" part isn't true. no one deserves to be beaten. but other than that its a great poem. keep on writing.

You can come and check out some of my poems if and when you please to do so...

WOW!WOW!WOW! This is definatley one of my favorites! I loved this sooo much and this is exactly how I feel about my boyfreind! Amazing work!
<3Much Love<3
~*hAiLy*~

awww, that's so cute, very well written! 5/5

i love this poem, its so true and very nicely put..great job

Great poem, Ive found Love once but I let it go, it was the biggest mistake of my life.
Look forward to read more of your poems.
Please check mine out it would mean a lot!!

wow this poem is amazing you did such a good job keep it up 5/5

great poem....i can totally relate

Cute

not bad, keep up the good work!!

Thats really good....
it really reminds me of my xboy friend...Imiss him so much....i hope well turn out like the poem...
but not with my luck

Thats the most brilliant poem I have read in a long time! Buzzing with emotion and you can read that what your saying is coming from the depths f your heart....You're an amazing poet I love you're work - I wouldn't mind some tips- Please comment and vote on some of mine xx
~*~ DarkTink ~*~

This is one if the best poems ive read on here!

I think everyone has been there at one point or another. I get an overwhelming feeling when I read your poem. I have definatley had those same feelings and was unable to express myself the way you have.
Keep up the great work. You rock!

i love your poem that how i feel adout my x-boyfreind check one of mine some time good job 5/5

***donn-yelle***