by *~CaSsYa~* Jul 23, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
love is
It's when the heart explodes into fireworks |
i agree, really good poem until the last two lines; i think you left out a 'say' and 'i love you so much' is five words! not being mean, just constructive criticism, we all make silly mistakes like that! |
by Kane Burden
Was a good poem hun, untill the last 2 lines :S really confusing! perhaps you should have a look at it again :) Kind regards from Kane |