This, to me, is your best from what I've read so far. I relate to your work in ways....and your an honest writer....your work is touching. This poem at first seemed unfinished....but I think about it and maybe not. Keep writing ;)

xxx

amazingly written, you shall get a 5 ^.^

very intersting..i got kinda lost in the middle but i tend to do that so i dono if it is me or the poem...lol...but anyways very well writting i like how all your poems are filled with emotion...great job...luv yas mwah

-kayla-