Wow Katie that was amazing! The way you described your feelings! Very powerful the flow was perfect. Although it was extremely sad! Take Care! Brooke~

This poem descibed your feelings so beautifully, very powerful and strongly written.....Perfect flow and rhyming....Keep writing such great poems sweet Katie, cause I love reading them =0) I just wish that you would be happier...cause you deserve it...

*Lova Sabrina*

awww very sad. you kept the rhyming flowing the whole time. excellent job!

*Speechless* This is my favorite poem so far. It describes so much pain and has so much emotion in it, and I'm sure lots of people can relate.ღ

wow another very amazing, powerful and deep poem... im very impressed with you work...it really is something great and keep ur head up