this poem is so true... it has such a significan't meaning... amazing... ^_^

*..KimiC..* XxXo0oXxX

Yeah...i totally agree with you...that's why i wrote the poem stupid idiots...oh man...they can be so difficult sometimes...anyway...nice poem...

I go through a lot of abuse every day. its hard but i'm still alive. you might not recognize me but im the writer of "When all of us were still kids". i go through that a lot. it's really good even if it's just for 4 stanzas. you did great.

My mom would always call me fat, and i know she still thinks i am right now, and whenever she says it it just tears my heart apart, i feel horrible about myself, and i overeat. that's why i cant stop being fat. everytime i try to get thin she always makes me feel bad.

and my dad, oh my dad. that b4$+4RD tried to lock all the food inside the closet so i couldnt get to it. i was only 9. i hated feeling so fat, and i still do. i wish my parents would just be nice...

but yeah, my mom works for CPS and thats where abused kids go. it's really sad b/c tragic things always happen to them. grownups are so immature sometimes, coming up with stupid ways to do something that could be done if they were patient.

when i grow up and if i have kids, i want to spoil them lucky. dont make them feel bad. but dont spoiled kids turn out rotten?

A really good subject for you to write about.

excellent work doing so too

october