by NannO Jul 23, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
This poem is very close to my heart.. it talked about something that really happened one day in school.. i wrote it with a broken heart.. and i hesitated to post it coz i wasn't ready to share it yet.. but now i think i am.. so plz read, rate and comment..it would mean a lot |
by Unknown Soul
Aww this is really cute nd sad, good job...definitely 5/5 |
by holly
Wow this is another beautiful poem, it almost brought me to tears well done exellent jod xxALLYxx |
by Nee
OMG NannO |
by Ariana
I liked this, some of your words are very nice and the imagery fits well. I'd suggest adding something on the end cause to me it sounded like it was endinga bit prematurely. Anyways, nice write :) |
This poem is beautiful, it conveys so much emotion through stratigically chosen words and rhyming patterns. i love it. |