I'd love to read part two!! Great Job! 5/5, Cooids forever

great jobz love it!

-Josiah

Great poem, this in my opinion is one of your best!! I like the flow you chose for this poem, and the imagery it created when i read it... Awsome poem... thanks for commenting on mine by the way, but had some little f**ker come and give it a 1 :(
Look forward to seing more like this, kind regards from kane

I loved the images you painted in this poem they were very well done all and all I gave you a 4 i will read the other one now take care...

good job i liked it... i shoulda read it in the right order.. but i didnt... either way... they would be good poems by theirselfs... anyways, good job
~*~Ashley~*~