by Dark Kitten Jul 23, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
rekindled love
Standing still, |
The ending to this poem was definitely the best part - I loved it. Once again I thought the flow was really good, too. Nice work. |
by Sole
Aww such a sweet ending - awesome poetry - yet again! I'm running out of things to say once more. So I'll just leave you with 5/5 this time ;) |
Gosh that poem was really big 2....wow..u are amazing..i have enjoyed readin ur poems that u told me 2 comment...thanx 4 posting on my forum thingy! |
by Atomic
I really like the ending, so romantic. =) |
by Jamie
Okay i dont exactly get this...how did you get in the cage? unless the cave was like depression and he saved you from it thats understandable i guess and in that case its a very cool poem and if it is meant to a metaphor thats very interesting and creative |