Good poem. Thoughts lingering in your mind, but try to distaught them by playing loud music :D Great peice, Kind regards from Kane

Interesting poem, very well done. I'm not much for slang poetry, but I liked this one. Nice rhytmn (SC), good overall poem.

/: Shadow--Stalker :\

very interesting way of writing it but I still liked it! every time I read you poems it always something new :p

-Josiah