great poem gurl! i love wat u said "the way u make life worthwhile" thats so true, guys make ur life everything, make u feel special, like nothing could hurt u as long as he is around. its too bad the way all of that just suddenly ends, and u feel like nothing again.

awesome job. love the poem. Short and sweet. keep it up!

Very nice poem!
You just feel all the emotions through the word who flow so great!
Sweet, sweet, sweet!
I sure love it!

xxx

Very very sweet

Hey. i loved it. it was awesome. and its so true too. keep it up. great job! 5/5

kelsey
xoxoxo