My shoes

by Joey P   Jul 23, 2005


I wish people can walk in my shoes,
I feel like dying cause I have nothing to lose.

I lay in my bed at night thinking why,
About me wishing I can die.

I hate crying and cutting myself,
Feeling like no one here can help.

I wanna be happy. Instead of pretending to be,
This pain I feel and what you cant see.

Looking at this razor and thinking its the right thing to do,
If only you can take a walk in my shoes.

This is my second poem other than the one's in my sidekick but I feel like this everyday no matter wat happens.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Marjan

    hey joey,
    amazing poem. You're one of the best poets on this site. keep writing.
    wish you the best,
    marjan

  • 19 years ago

    by Morgan

    great poem...i really enjoyed it...keep ur head up...things will get better

  • 19 years ago

    by Torn

    you presented your feeling soo well through this. i know exactly what you mean...and i'm adding you to my favourites too:P always here xoxox

  • 19 years ago

    by Pilar

    awsome!!!
    the "walk in my shoes" idea is great!!!
    i really like how u write i'll add u to my favorites if u don't mind ^^

    take care,

    p i l i . . .

  • 19 years ago

    by Razorblade

    Ooh. I like this one too, very relateable.

    Always here,
    -Razor-

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