Comments : My shoes

  • cool poem, i like the way it was about taking a day in my shoes... really simple but great Xx

  • hey! I think that you express really good a lot of feelings in this poem! Keep on writing! and thanx 4 the comment!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Razorblade

    Ooh. I like this one too, very relateable.

    Always here,
    -Razor-

  • 19 years ago

    by Pilar

    awsome!!!
    the "walk in my shoes" idea is great!!!
    i really like how u write i'll add u to my favorites if u don't mind ^^

    take care,

    p i l i . . .

  • 19 years ago

    by Torn

    you presented your feeling soo well through this. i know exactly what you mean...and i'm adding you to my favourites too:P always here xoxox

  • 19 years ago

    by Morgan

    great poem...i really enjoyed it...keep ur head up...things will get better

  • 19 years ago

    by Marjan

    hey joey,
    amazing poem. You're one of the best poets on this site. keep writing.
    wish you the best,
    marjan