by lostlllsoul Jul 24, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
He stood at a quite corner |
Oh sad I wrote a poem really similar to that my freshmen year about a kid |
by Mezmeryz
That was a wicked poem!! it was the most moving poem ive ever read!! it was deep!! very sad though i loved it. |
Over all I like it. There were some parts I thought would rhyme but didnt but I do that too sometimes so me telling you isnt much. Well I'll give ya a five. c ya. |
Is it true...it sounds like it...and who is he(if you don't mind telling me)...it sounds like he suffered a great deal... |
by hm
Mad poem!!! keep it up that was strong an d deep and so great i could feel the emotions |