hey that was good.. i really like it.. and i liked how you use the "take my hand it says" in every stanza!! that really makes the poem! thanks so much for commenting on my poem!! it really means alot to me!! bye bye EJ

I loved this poem. I think it flowed very well, and I think it was beautifully written. Keep it up. xX

The repeation in every stanza made the flow like water. The word choice again was simple but great, and the emtion was clear. 5/5

I really enjoyed this one. The repetition made it interesting, and kept it together. This one also made me think a lot. It seemed deep, and full of feelings, I could tell you were feeling hard for what you were writing.

Great poem!
5/5