You'll have so many memories as you get older. It's also fun to think back! I can remember the guys I thought I loved and now it's just a joke. Very true we all have an unforgettable memory. Good work! Take Care! Brooke~

Great job erikka! again there was nothing that i could see that needed to be changed the only thing i would see is that you could break it up into stanza's but thats your choice... and i think its fine as is.. Im sorrie about ur b/f tho i wouldn't want those memories either.. Anywyas great job.. u had an awesome rhyme scheme keep up the great work!

It's such a shame when you drift away from someone who you were so close to, this happened to me once so I can relate, this poem explains it really well, I liked the scheme and the flow was very good, the rhyming wasnt forced..

well done

xxxx

i really love your poem it sound like me and my x-boyfriend i love him some much can you plz comment on my poem alone at night good job 5/5

Wow, your amazing. Your piece touched my heart, and sent chills up my spine. Because I can relate. You have an amazing talent, keep the good work up. I Enjoyed Your Work.

I can relate somewhat to that... The pain of a memory... Ah well. What's done is done though.. right? ciao! ^_~

I think I shed a tear on that one. That was great.

Excellent poem.

that was an excellent poem, very nice structure and rhyming done there. Keep up the good work.. btw thx for commenting on mine

Another great poem!!!! ur a realy good writer!! keep up the good work!!

*~peace and love~*

wow... you amaze me. you're such a good writer and so young too. like the flow to your poems...

wow i have the exact same situation...very good poem, well written and i liked the emotion in it :)

take care
Sara

on the 6th line should *of* be *have*
i just notice it, love the poem tho. it was amazing to read. keep writing, xxx

Very wonderful poem,though sad in the end.loved it
take care :)