LIES AND FEAR INSIDE

by kevin   Jul 24, 2005


The hate burning in my eyes,with the lies and fear inside. Seeing the first, but not seeing the last. Kowning all,but kowning why. Day after day time is ticing and the end is coming more than we know it.At last the END.

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  • 19 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Sounds like some deep emotion...short but surely meaningful...I would suggest separating the lines....and "ticing" is a typo, I believe you meant "ticking."

    If you post other poems, let me know. I'd like to see some longer poems that go more in depth and detail as to why this hatred and fear is hiding inside of you.

    xxx