hey this is a good poem..but let me give you some pointers..not about the poem about this..if it is true. i have been with a guy before that did almost the same thing to me..he hurt me he hit me and he made me do things i didn't want to do. but i got away..thank god. and i found someone else who loves me with everything they have. i wrote a poem about what happened to me and it is true. read it if you can thank you so much..and good job.. Crystal