Life Today

by Michael   Jul 24, 2005




Life:
there is so much to it.

There is hatred,
violence,
wars,
blood spilling,
torture,
pollution,
deaths,
diseases,
viruses,,
distrust,
cheating,
disgust,
loath,
disrespect,
rudeness,
weapons,
drugs,
terrorism,
sadness,
depression,
suicides,
neglect,
yelling,
enslavement,
racism,
evil,
natural disasters,
greed,
envy,
stealing,
lies,
rape,
insanity,
lust,
heart broken,
lost love,
bombs,
suing,
anger,
stereotyping,
ugliness,
darkness...

Life has so much to it.

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  • 19 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Yeah, i know, but you didn't mention happiness, cause my life is filled with it...be happy...michael...how you're doing by the way...good luck...

  • 19 years ago

    by Scary Dream, Beautiful Nightmare

    Wow this poem is soo true it is scary.. but It is great
    *Sarah*

  • 19 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Thank you...only shut up about putting yourself and your work down though...I still wanna hear what you have to say... ;)

  • 19 years ago

    by Michael

    Shutting up...

  • 19 years ago

    by undying blusher

    erg...stop it...don't say your opinion on your own work unless it's not negative like that...let the reader decide for herself/himself. I know it's hard, I used to belittle my work when I first began.

    The poem is not bad. You know why? Because, sadly, it is true...it could be improved a little...for example, I think "loath" should say "loathing" to sort of keep the pattern...just b/c it could use some improvement doesn't mean it is bad.

    xxx

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