Yah...short and bad... a new low point in poetry...

erg...stop it...don't say your opinion on your own work unless it's not negative like that...let the reader decide for herself/himself. I know it's hard, I used to belittle my work when I first began.

The poem is not bad. You know why? Because, sadly, it is true...it could be improved a little...for example, I think "loath" should say "loathing" to sort of keep the pattern...just b/c it could use some improvement doesn't mean it is bad.

xxx

Shutting up...

Thank you...only shut up about putting yourself and your work down though...I still wanna hear what you have to say... ;)

Wow this poem is soo true it is scary.. but It is great
*Sarah*

Yeah, i know, but you didn't mention happiness, cause my life is filled with it...be happy...michael...how you're doing by the way...good luck...