My heart is so cold. (Lune)

by Steven Beesley   Jul 24, 2005


Every night freezes
My heart is so cold
Love already gone

Lune:
American form of poetry similar to a Haiku. The are two methods to writing a lune:-

Method 1

Line 1 - 3 words
Line 2 - 5 words
Line 3 - 3 words

and

Method 2

Line 1 - 5 syllables
Line 2 - 3 syllables
Line 3 - 5 syllables

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  • 19 years ago

    by *rach*and*bee*

    hey thanx!
    i've been looking for a new style, and i like writing poems that don't rhyme. i think it takes longer to make them rhyme and that takes some of the spontaneous, true emotion out of it.
    keep writing!
    peace
    *rachel*

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