great story. i cant help but wonder did the dream come true? hehehe

Hey, thanks for your comments... in answer to joey's and melissa's questions... no, it didn't come true =( *tear*...

Thanks Savanna, i won't give it up that easy...

And thanks Taylor... =P

you should give ie up..you would be great!!! im not trying to be a perv or anything cuz i am a girl im just sayin damn...that makes me want to go have sex!

WOW!

hey great poem u got a good little mind to be a virgain but anyway keep up the great work!
-TRIP

WOW!!!!!!! very good....so if ur dream did not come true then what did you do when he came over?....i am a virgin to and i am gunna hold off till marriage just cuz thats the way i was brought up....:)

your first poem ! WOW i like how ur words make your poem flow from beginning to end great poem 5/5

iv read all your poems keep writing i hope to read more!! ;)

=D