I cant love you..

by Hans Fausto   Jul 24, 2005


I cant stop thinking of you
you've opened heart and set it aflame

you've entered my dreams and given me life
you've enlightened my soul and got rid of my strife

you would always be there for me
to dry my tears
and embrace me
when i would be afraid of my fears

but then i realize, your something i cannot have
because your something so special to me
and it would kill me to see you get hurt
especially by the person whom we all know as me

but the fact will not change, that i really do love you
thats why im doing this just for you

i may not be able to love you the way i expect it to be
but always remember im call away if ever you need me

because you have a special place in my heart
where i can love you the way you are
and be there for you even if you are so far...

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  • 19 years ago

    by amelia

    Ah ! excellent work !! clould rhyme better but good job indeed

  • 19 years ago

    by Jamie

    I think you left out a couple words here and there such as the second line i think you meant to say *you've opened MY heart...* maybe not but it sounds better that way and *im ONE one call away...*

    really good story line your rhymes were quite elementary *me and be and things like that* however you did keep the consistancy so that was good, good job ill give it a 4/5

  • 19 years ago

    by ~~Fire Angel~~

    I have been in a situation exactly like this before, and i loved the way that you voiced it! 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Arora

    I can relate to this in a way.... 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by NannO

    nice one too.. but i thot it lacked the 'spice' that is needed in a poem such as this one.. and ur flow was only a bit off.. but i lykd ur words, especially the last stanza.
    keep goin!
    nouna

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