Comments : Last broken dream

  • 19 years ago

    by Marjan

    really touching Joe and very well written. It had a very good flow.
    great job. keep it up. you're so
    talented.
    marjan

  • 19 years ago

    by SuperJenius

    Awsome i loveD it
    it had a righteous flow ;
    Keep it up !
    I can't wait to read more
    ~HazE~

  • 19 years ago

    by SuperJenius

    I just read your poem again i didnt vote last time but im definatley giving you a five it waz totally trancendent it waz great wow i loved it
    ~HazE