really wonderful poem. keep it up.
take care,
marjan

AwsomE PoeM I KnoW ExactlY WhaT YoU MeaN
~HazE

This is a really good poem.It's so true.

Looking through your poems you do short but great work.
I really like this poem the way you made the world like a rose.
This was a great idea and a great feel....good stuff.

Beautiful poem. I however, believe that when u find the true love of your life, all that pain and hurt built up over the years is for a cause. Because again, "the pain now if part of the happiness then." Its all a balance. If we had it perfect then there would be nothing to strive for. Love is neverending. No matter how many times we say to ourselves, after this person, i shall never love again. It is never dying in a sense that if the flame dies for one, it can be rekindled by another. Ambitons and dreams and love are what rule minds and prevail if given the chance. To truly be happy one must be content with themselves, in order to love others, and hence meaning is found in pain. In order to be content with oneself, one must see through ungaurded eyes, the eyes of love, so beautiful and distinct in their presence. Also, before any meaning can be given to the larger picture, the little details must be regarded for. I love this poem and the way you think. Very nice work:)

oh if u get a chance, could u read mine titled "him and her" or "innocence"?

Ana*

Heya, I picked this one because I have a poem "you are like a rose" and I find it interesting to see others veiws on the idea..

Yours is very good, I lkoved your words usage and your flow was very good, but I was expecting a great ending and was dissapointed =( all In all It was great! well done x)