Comments : The Nightmare

  • 19 years ago

    by EJ

    I liked this this poem.. some spots got a little ruff but it was still good!! bye bye EJ

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Tossing and turning
    In my bed of nails
    Head pounding, stomach churning
    Waiting for the pain
    this has to be my favorite stanza. wonderfully well written, the word choice was wickedly wonderful, and the emtion was deep and dark once again. Perfect 5/5