by Tainted Beauty Jul 24, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Destroy me with your power, |
by Syn
...i loved it. |
this is pretty great... you did a good job. It's got good description in it and it flows well... but for some reason i can't get into it right now.. its not because i dont like it or think its not good, its just cuz of the mood im in... blah.. but yeah... thanks for checking out my poems... i apreciate it alot! |
by Patrik
Great poem there, liked it alot, maybe you could devide it up in paragraphs though?.p |