ohh woah, that was really good. I'm actually wondering why i am in this club, Everyones poems are soo Original and unique, I really liked this poem, i felt it, i dont know how i girl could do this to you, you seem so nice.
Im going to check out some more.
xox Bam

*i dont know how A Girl, not i girl
sorry

very deep. it caught a hold of me and i felt as though something was caught in my throat. very good...

Dang, that was great, very strong, it just like shows what your feeling, but no your not as bad as her rapist, because she said she wanted you, and she provoked you, so dont believe that you raped her cause u didnt. but anyways i dont know y in gods green eath a girl would do that to you, in my eyes u sound sweet and she had no reason, he scared her for life, and she may have (which from what i get from teh poem she did) scare you for life.
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Very good i wish i can improve my writing and write like that someday