Do you want?

by Tainted Beauty   Jul 24, 2005


Do you want me to,
Make a promise I can’t keep?
Or would you rather,
Just let me be me?
Do you want me to lie?
Or suffer under the truth,
Do you want me to die?
Or have to live without you?
Do you want me to shatter?
Or hide and say I’m ok,
Would you rather I stay trapped,
Or try to get away?
Do you want me to understand?
Or do I just stay confused?
Can I live my life?
Or do I still have to depend on you?

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  • 19 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    This is also great, it had great rhyme and great meaning :)

  • 19 years ago

    by InMyWorld

    i like how you wrote this poem, the form is not one i see often...i also like the topic. i'm sure a lot of us have been there. great job, keep it up!!

    take care
    Sara

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    I liked the uniqueness of this poem and how you asked questions. Very good questions too. Well done! Brooke~

  • 19 years ago

    by Nicholle

    no i don't have MSN i do have AIM though. this poem was also very well written, I liked the format and the way it's all questions. this was great.

  • 19 years ago

    by Anonymous

    Thats a 5/5 no doubt...

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